Minggu, 03 Februari 2008

Escaping

Again and again And again..
Always..
Everytime..
Everyday..
I can't escape ..
I'm stuck..
I've been abandoned..
in the scariest thing i could imagine..
Nobody know...
only me and myself.
try to escape..
try to run away..
but it's a dead end..
again..
i'm stopped by the silence..
all the scream and cries are USELESS!!!
please release me from this unbrokeable chain..
there's nothing i can do..
i'm just hoping..
this chain will finally broken..
or waiting..
till..

1 komentar:

K14121 mengatakan...

hey, you're not that bad at making free form poems...due try to add a bit of sturcture to it tho? divide into stanzas and add rhymes? It might make it easier to roll off the tongue :) but all in all, is there something you're dreading? fearing? We're friends, tell me! and the rest of us. we're here to help